Comments on: Using the Communications Factor http://onthemarkwriting.wordpress.com/2008/05/09/using-the-communications-factor/ You have only one chance to make a first impression. Tue, 10 Nov 2009 02:03:48 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: onthemarkwriting http://onthemarkwriting.wordpress.com/2008/05/09/using-the-communications-factor/#comment-484 onthemarkwriting Mon, 12 May 2008 12:35:09 +0000 http://onthemarkwriting.wordpress.com/?p=267#comment-484 I really like your pitch, Bonnie. It intrigues the people to whom you say it, and makes them -- or at least it did me -- want to follow up with you and learn more! Thanks for the comment. Mark I really like your pitch, Bonnie. It intrigues the people to whom you say it, and makes them — or at least it did me — want to follow up with you and learn more!

Thanks for the comment.

Mark

]]> By: Bonnie Gean http://onthemarkwriting.wordpress.com/2008/05/09/using-the-communications-factor/#comment-479 Bonnie Gean Sat, 10 May 2008 13:34:48 +0000 http://onthemarkwriting.wordpress.com/?p=267#comment-479 Mark, I totally agree! I’ve taken some time in creating my own elevator speech. In fact, I have a long version, medium version, and even a one-liner. I think it sounds pretty decent… What do you think of this: “I help business professionals build a community of clients and prospects with a 3-step exposure program that positions them as an expert, allows them to connect with their audience, and helps them turn business leads into raving fans.” Did I earn a gold star? :) All good things, Bonnie Gean Mark,

I totally agree!

I’ve taken some time in creating my own elevator speech. In fact, I have a long version, medium version, and even a one-liner. I think it sounds pretty decent…

What do you think of this:

“I help business professionals build a community of clients and prospects with a 3-step exposure program that positions them as an expert, allows them to connect with their audience, and helps them turn business leads into raving fans.”

Did I earn a gold star? :)

All good things,
Bonnie Gean

]]> By: Marilyn A Magallanes http://onthemarkwriting.wordpress.com/2008/05/09/using-the-communications-factor/#comment-478 Marilyn A Magallanes Sat, 10 May 2008 04:59:28 +0000 http://onthemarkwriting.wordpress.com/?p=267#comment-478 this is great content writing Mark! It is easily understood, concise and to the point... like a written e-pitch ;-) thanks for sharing with me. best ~mm this is great content writing Mark! It is easily understood, concise and to the point… like a written e-pitch ;-) thanks for sharing with me.
best ~mm

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